The Most Truth That I Know

If we could conquer greed then we would conquer need.
This is the most truth that I know.
I only wish it could be so.

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4 Comments

  1. Posted February 10, 2010 at 12:28 pm | Permalink

    if we could conquer greed
    we would conquer need
    but who is going to lead
    and do the first good deed
    before we all, to death, bleed

  2. Posted February 14, 2010 at 4:46 pm | Permalink

    Cool poem! Now, try to turn it into a Haiku:

    trees use what they need
    never wasting elements
    beauty in motion

  3. Posted February 14, 2010 at 5:11 pm | Permalink

    Looks like I’m starting a poetry corner here so all contributions welcome: I’ll let others critique them :)

  4. Posted February 14, 2010 at 8:58 pm | Permalink

    OK, trying it out as a Haiku

    The most truth I know
    Conquer greed to conquer need
    Wish it could be so

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