If we could conquer greed then we would conquer need. This is the most truth that I know. I only wish it could be so.
if we could conquer greed we would conquer need but who is going to lead and do the first good deed before we all, to death, bleed
Cool poem! Now, try to turn it into a Haiku:
trees use what they need never wasting elements beauty in motion
Looks like I’m starting a poetry corner here so all contributions welcome: I’ll let others critique them
OK, trying it out as a Haiku
The most truth I know Conquer greed to conquer need Wish it could be so
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if we could conquer greed
we would conquer need
but who is going to lead
and do the first good deed
before we all, to death, bleed
Cool poem! Now, try to turn it into a Haiku:
trees use what they need
never wasting elements
beauty in motion
Looks like I’m starting a poetry corner here so all contributions welcome: I’ll let others critique them
OK, trying it out as a Haiku
The most truth I know
Conquer greed to conquer need
Wish it could be so